Comments for Escritiendo http://misssedgwick.wordpress.com Just another WordPress.com weblog Mon, 28 Apr 2008 20:40:43 +0000 http://wordpress.com/ hourly 1 Comment on I am a mythbuster. by theamazingnicole http://misssedgwick.wordpress.com/2008/04/27/i-am-a-mythbuster/#comment-15 theamazingnicole Mon, 28 Apr 2008 20:40:43 +0000 http://misssedgwick.wordpress.com/?p=16#comment-15 Sarah, you are very talented and very gifted. I loved how you disproved this myth. I could sense your passion and frustration and I thought you presented it very well in your essay. I liked how you including those interesting biological and biblical facts--that was really shocking. I love your haircut by the way and I think it suits you just fine--it shows off your beautiful face. I also wrote about women and a common stereotype if you want to check it out I think you'd like it, hopefully it will empower you like your essay empowered me. Awsome writing. Keep it up and I really hope you make it into the School of the Arts! Sarah, you are very talented and very gifted. I loved how you disproved this myth. I could sense your passion and frustration and I thought you presented it very well in your essay. I liked how you including those interesting biological and biblical facts–that was really shocking. I love your haircut by the way and I think it suits you just fine–it shows off your beautiful face. I also wrote about women and a common stereotype if you want to check it out I think you’d like it, hopefully it will empower you like your essay empowered me. Awsome writing. Keep it up and I really hope you make it into the School of the Arts!

]]> Comment on I am a mythbuster. by Sonzogni http://misssedgwick.wordpress.com/2008/04/27/i-am-a-mythbuster/#comment-14 Sonzogni Mon, 28 Apr 2008 12:20:23 +0000 http://misssedgwick.wordpress.com/?p=16#comment-14 Excellent paper, Sarah: I especially like the way that you incorporated various sources into your paper, especially the Scarlet Letter. Additionally, your paper being written from a personal point of view definitely strengthened your argument, especially with the inclusion of statements such as: <i>It means we just have to find the right kind of partner.</i> Anyhow, excellent paper. =] Excellent paper, Sarah: I especially like the way that you incorporated various sources into your paper, especially the Scarlet Letter. Additionally, your paper being written from a personal point of view definitely strengthened your argument, especially with the inclusion of statements such as:

It means we just have to find the right kind of partner.

Anyhow, excellent paper. =]

]]> Comment on I am a mythbuster. by prwilliams http://misssedgwick.wordpress.com/2008/04/27/i-am-a-mythbuster/#comment-13 prwilliams Mon, 28 Apr 2008 00:30:05 +0000 http://misssedgwick.wordpress.com/?p=16#comment-13 Sarah, you're paper was most interesting! I loved the topic; it is very similar to mine-the questioning of a woman's sexual origin based on her athletic performance. The wide range of sources-scientific, literary, and personal-greatly appeal to logos and significantly strengthen your point. Great Job! Sarah, you’re paper was most interesting! I loved the topic; it is very similar to mine-the questioning of a woman’s sexual origin based on her athletic performance. The wide range of sources-scientific, literary, and personal-greatly appeal to logos and significantly strengthen your point. Great Job!

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